eh....
lip sync was good, turn your brush smoothing down to 40 so you can get more accurate lines, also the story needs work, of course you probably aren't going to go back to the storyboard and write it out completely different.
- another thing if your not already doing it, you should storyboard; so that you can see how it will be before yo go straight into the animatic (stage before the final product)
There was no movement besides the lips, which made for a boring watch.
hope this helps,
flashero